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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
okay i see with the
gotta fix that,
but the....
she may be open to reveal, but no one is willing to take the time to "read" her. which is what i try to explain when i said
okay, how about...
She wanders around aimlessly
She is meant to have a purpose
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hmm...still kind of confusing. from the rest of the song, it seems as if the subject is putting on an act for the rest of the world. By saying she is meant to have a purpose, you're saying that the rest of the world is imposing a standard upon her to follow, which isn't really coherant with the rest of the song. Also, the lyrics are really repetitive, i'd suggest spending some more time with it, and elaborating on the fact that the girl in the song is putting on an act for the rest of the world, without using the same lines over and over.
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