I coulda swore I review this...
Umm, yea the "she" and "they" part is way repetitive..other than that I like it...
They are willing to let anyone in if they actually tried <<that part actually kinda doesn't go with the rest of the "they" part in my opinion...maybe if you re-worded it a tinge...
When she looks in the mirror, she sees two too << the "too" shouldn't be here yet, just at the end of the song, because we haven't yet heard of another person or "they"....
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