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toosik · 07-29-2016, 04:18 PM

To be honest, the last few about my Mrs, are more a kind of therapy through word play. Obviously, the meter is too inconsistent to pass as poetry or rap , but as someone who smothers negative emotions, the process of writing down the thoughts and emotions I would normally deny myself, whilst trying to rhyme the same 3 syllables almost 40 times, forced me to really look at the situation from all angles. Whatever, it helped at the time, so f.uck it.
I still think that managing that many rhymes of better me, and still have it make sense when you read it is impressive in itself . If you haven't already, look at the first few pages. That is where my rap lyrics and battles are. Let me know what you think about those.

Thanks for the feedback though. Appreciate it

07-29-2016, 04:18 PM	#59 (permalink)
toosik Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: UK Posts: 82	To be honest, the last few about my Mrs, are more a kind of therapy through word play. Obviously, the meter is too inconsistent to pass as poetry or rap , but as someone who smothers negative emotions, the process of writing down the thoughts and emotions I would normally deny myself, whilst trying to rhyme the same 3 syllables almost 40 times, forced me to really look at the situation from all angles. Whatever, it helped at the time, so f.uck it. I still think that managing that many rhymes of better me, and still have it make sense when you read it is impressive in itself . If you haven't already, look at the first few pages. That is where my rap lyrics and battles are. Let me know what you think about those. Thanks for the feedback though. Appreciate it