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Originally Posted by crashingsun
"smile for your warmth"
it's saying "don't grow old," not "grow up"
this is a song for you, not for me
thanks for the thoughts
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i still think you need to reword...
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you say that the world is cold
so take off your coat -- don't grow old
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& i know the song was meant for someone, not for yourself, but that particular part still sounds like you're comforting yourself...if its meant to comfort the other person, shouldnt it be something along the terms of...
i know what you're going to say
and i think that it's okay
You know when you're feeling blue
i can sing a song for you