Chula Vista

VERY COOL! To be brutally honest though....

1. Your playing in the beginning is way behind the beat (Webster's definition: buzzed). Give it another shot while clearer.

2. Stay away from adding stuff where it's already pretty dense. Spice up the sparser areas.

3. I'm really proud of my outro solo. Maybe add some cool stuff that compliments my choice of notes.

All in all, for a first take I'm digging it! Give it another go for sure.

So, what do you think of the track in general?

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