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Originally Posted by hobojesus
I'm creeping behind/
Like it's a crime/
It's about time/
You learnt a lesson/
We're here/
And we're ready to test them/
It's easy with your knowledge/
I feed off your soul/
Take it like your Brother/
and let her feel whole/
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it was good until the last two lines
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Feel like I'm taking/
another stab of that shit/
What is it? What is it?/
Don't want no part of it
Feel like I'm drinking/
another sip of that shit/
What is it? What is it?/
Don't want no part of it/
Revolutionary/
The king of my time/
creeping up behind/
found out it's a crime/
I'll take your earnings with one foul swipe/
You don't come near because you know my type/
My bowler hat with the purple stripe/
The glisten from the glue signals your life/
I celebrate your fears/
like they on parade/
cos Death's round the corner/
and he's selling lemonade
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nothing needs to be changed. this is my favorite part
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I feel its only not a matter/
that you can hear their feet patter/
before they come out/
like you knew about/
she wept when you left/
yet you showed no sorrow/
she wants you hear now/
but only if tomorrow/
will continue not a progression of past/
you rear your head but how long will it last/
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i bolded that part because it sounded like you were talking about one thing then changing it into something else. what i mean, is thats the part that confused me.
but yea, i like this, needs to be fixed just a lil bit