although this song definately shows your talents as a writer, i must say... i really dont like it. It has some real flow problems (so far as i can tell) and alot of the yeah's and oh's really turned me off.
its a concept that i cant begin to describe... which is a good thing
although theres only love over here... suger coating = crap
yes you are one of the best
this... is not
i would expect the same harshness