Crowe

I liked your interpretation jib.

When I read it, I thought that they had knocked boots and while they know the mistake will it them tommorrow, they might as well enjoy the moment.

I really, really liked this creep.

I read it over a couple of times, the one thing I feel is missing, like a hole in your stomach, is the tie in between verses. The connection there is vague and translucent. I don't know how to go about fixing it though, and even more, describing what I'd do to it since we write so differently. But a further look at that would solidify the song!

As far as semantics go....

TAKE INWARD OUT and it becomes a powerful, powerful line in my opinion. Try it out and see if you like it.

I'm going to say this in the words of the famous poet, "Nelly"
... Hot shit, creep.