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Originally Posted by Ki
No worries. I made some changes here and there. Though, I will question your reasoning in bolded as the article was focused on pointing out obvious points given the nature of the images and article alike. I do tend to repeat myself, which is the unfortunate reality of needing a certain word count per image, but I'm working on it.
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The entire paragraph about "Sailor Mouth" for instance. Not sure if obvious points is the right word but like it read off very poorly to me.