The 'like you knew about' line meant that the guy had sex with this girl and had a feeling that there would be some repercussions. The 'she wept when you left' line meant that the guy had left once he knew that there was going to be some repurcussions, and the woman was upset when he did so. I thought those were quite a good couple of lines-I was mostly worried how the 'Death is around the corner selling lemonade' line would go down, because I think that can either be the most powerful line or the most hated. I'm glad it became the former. Thanks for the help.
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