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Originally Posted by Qwertyy
Not to pick at your writing, but in the future I would stay away from using an indecisive term like 'decent.' You don't want your readers thinking you don't believe in what you're saying, so going with the 'the best part' or 'what separates it from others,' or something along those lines.
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That's not originally how the paragraph started but unfortunately it was altered because it got cut off as mentioned above.