I like this one. The only thing i think needs to be done is to take away that space inbetween
My frantic scrambling to make it otherwise and
And the volume rises. If you want to put spaces you could put spaces between the line that has a period and the line beneath it.
my favorite part is
Quote:
And the volume rises,
The picture is getting clearer,
I'm trapped in a constant barrage,
It's not a broadcast anymore,
It's the live production.
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