02-26-2017, 08:05 PM
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Prepare 4 the Fight Scene
Join Date: Jun 2011
Posts: 7,674
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Originally Posted by Suzy Creamcheese
Just read a bit of it. I'd say your direction and formatting are spot on. I only noticed one error, near the end of the second paragraph ("You Never could.") But then again, the capitalization of "never" in the sentence could be intentional, for emphasis.
Either way, definitely keep writing man. You've got something going there.
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Is it scary
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Originally Posted by Oriphiel
Hmm, what's this in my pocket?
*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*
DAMN IT MONDO
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