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Originally Posted by Trollheart
What do you mean, gave it up?
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I gave up on the horror after the door part
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I probably would have left out the epilogue, and ended with him just coming back to the office, picking up a sheet and continuing his work. But really well written. Well done.
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yeah well that's why I'm the Shyamalan and you're not
but thanks
For that other one it's natural to not get the connection between scenes since I haven't yet made any connections between scenes