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crashingsun · 02-01-2006, 10:59 AM

How about, "now we're lost in all the spaces"? I like that better. And title: Lost in all the Spaces.

The world giving up/forgetting could be a high ending, or maybe they're ghosts and got killed somehow? Who's world is this? Personally yours or a world we all have access to but don't often visit? I really recommend being less vague. You need to drop a few more hints. I think that's why I don't usually like your stuff, when I can't understand it.

I like the first two lines but it fell apart for me after that.

02-01-2006, 10:59 AM	#2 (permalink)
crashingsun Groupie Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Left at Albuquerque Posts: 15	How about, "now we're lost in all the spaces"? I like that better. And title: Lost in all the Spaces. The world giving up/forgetting could be a high ending, or maybe they're ghosts and got killed somehow? Who's world is this? Personally yours or a world we all have access to but don't often visit? I really recommend being less vague. You need to drop a few more hints. I think that's why I don't usually like your stuff, when I can't understand it. I like the first two lines but it fell apart for me after that. __________________ People Against People "Scientists in Taiwan say they have bred three pigs that glow in the dark." (Support Spam)