My only minor complaint with it is that the last lines are completely superfluous; they assume the reader can't work out what was going on, so it has to be explained to him or her. I would have left out that "explanation" entirely. It also ends the story on an exclamation mark rather than three dots, as it were ....
Other than that, it's far and away the best here. I'd put Sunshine second, though the ending was meh.
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