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Originally Posted by angel18
She is hypnotised with grieve and loss
She can picture her granny wearing lip gloss
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Even if that song was Grade A material (Which it wasn't) even if it was stunningly emotional (which it wasn't) and overwhelmingly heart wrenching (which it wasn't) the song would still have been crap for that line alone. I honestly hope that you never spent time writing that. I know this forum is about constructive criticism, but there's no advice I can give you...except this...
STOP WRITING SONGS