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creepinson · 02-16-2006, 04:05 PM

thats a bit harsh... you just need to work on concept, rhyming, flow, emotion, vocabulary, mechanics, structure * takes a breath* and the use of literary devicies... besides that i think youre doing great

02-16-2006, 04:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	thats a bit harsh... you just need to work on concept, rhyming, flow, emotion, vocabulary, mechanics, structure * takes a breath* and the use of literary devicies... besides that i think youre doing great