Right okay then, I'll take your advice for once. I'll tell angel what she did wrong. First of all, you need to try and think of a new concept, or if you really want to use the granny concept you need to think of a better way to put it across. Next you need to try and think about each line for a while in your head, rather than writing down the first thing that popped up. And my last piece of advice? Try and write down the songs before you post them on MB and improve them as much as you can. Or do what I do, and open up a thread and spend some time writing it on the thread, instead of just throwing out a song. Look at other peoples songs on here. They'll help you improve.
Happy Misfits? I still preffered laying into people though...
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