Okay, I'm catching up ever so slowly. Did you ever think about self publishing, Trollheart? You can probably place stuff all over the internet and still be able to do that. I was going to set up a Wordpress site for what would have been my first novel but I ended up abandoning it. I'm actually in the slow process of editing my actual first novel (really a large novella) now.
The thing that sticks out for me on entries three through five is, 'He is coming.' You capitalize He which could mean maybe he's God, or perhaps some guy named He (somehow I don't think it's the latter
). In any event, this mysterious being must be somebody very important.
I'll read some more tomorrow, but so far it's pretty captivating. You're definitely a better writer than I am
.