Poor Hobo. If you say fuk opinions then why do you post so many songs?
I like the premise but dislike the uneven meter, the lines being medium, short, and long. The only real rhyme I got was the last one, maybe partly because the schemes didn't seemt to warm up until then. Some nice imagery but remember that junkies are people too. (There's no conclusion here.)
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