Second thing I noticed...make sure all your quotes go like this
"blah blah blah blah blah" (Source and page number if it's a book).
Period goes after the source, and quotations are closed around the actual quote, before the source. You did it right on some, but others were wrong.
And one last thing, personally I've been taught not to use first or second person in research papers, so on this
Quote:
|
No one in the Death Metal scene ever murdered someone else because of a reputation, or because their beliefs differed, but even if this had happened, the First Amendment, protects the right to free speech. You are allowed to express your opinion no matter how violent or misogynistic it may be.
|
I'd change the last sentence to "Musicians are allowed to express their opinion no matter how violent or misogynistic it may be."