Bruh, overly long stories that end in cheesy one liners need to have pacing and an orchestrated length. You just rambled. Presumably. Honestly doesn't matter cause no one was reading that so it was pointless.
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Originally Posted by J.R.R. Tolkien
There is only one bright spot and that is the growing habit of disgruntled men of dynamiting factories and power-stations; I hope that, encouraged now as ‘patriotism’, may remain a habit! But it won’t do any good, if it is not universal.
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