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Originally Posted by Oriphiel
Beautiful. Reminds me a bit of the story you wrote where those cockroaches hunted people, but funnier and better paced. 10/10
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Seriously? I know it definitely has echoes from
The Ruins of Eden, I kind of cringed a little at that, but I didn't want it to be too po-faced, and putting a disinterested kid in often lightens the mood. Still, it's pretty ****. I know I can do better. I just need to be motivated and interested in the subject matter, and with dinos, I just ain't.
I knew you'd like that. I put it in especially for you after reading Occult's Review of the Southern States thread.
