Originally Posted by Trollheart

Well I'm convinced.
Do you know how to use punctuation at your age? Sentences don't end in commas, commas don't follow one word usuallly (certainly not "example" - that would be a colon) and questions end in, well, question marks. Also, generally, only the first word in a sentence is capitalised. I've marked your errors in red to help you. You're welcome.