Some more points that have occurred to me:
1. The rat droppings (pellets) - what had they to do with it? You went quite a lot out of your way to draw attention to them, but why? I don't see how they fit in.
2. The dolls - what were they? The remains of the humans left after these guys had sucked their essence dry? And what did she mean that they weren't making one for Chuck or his wife? What did that signify? Maybe it was me, but the idea here didn't seem very clear.
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