Tell him to work out the actual story that he wants to tell, in terms of the plot, how does he want it to end, how does he want it to start? Then tell him to write as much about it as he can without trying to make it in rap form. Get him to read it to you in this non-rap form and suggest changes to the plot etc. that might be needed for it to make more sense. When he's happy with the story that he wants to tell he can then put it into rhyming form - obviously making it rhyme will restrict what can be included, but he should be able to put something together that makes sense from this.
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Originally Posted by Katyppfan
When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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