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Old 03-12-2006, 05:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
Jadix
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Originally Posted by DontRunMeOver
I'm sticking to this statement - two of my songs are up on:

Please criticise them. Particularly the lyrics and vocals, as that's what I do in the band so I have the most control over what they do!
Ok. Well before I start this know that I dont like emo music, so I may not be digging the sound you are trying for. You might be hitting it exactly how you want to, but I just dont like it. Ill try to tell you why.

"Obsolete Alibi"
Good sounding guitar intro.
Your voice sounds really whiny. Kinda ear piercing. Only when you say ALIBI though. As the song is going on I can hear something there that sounds really cool. You guys should go for a less emo sound, and more of a rock sound. I like the way you sing your verses. you have a better voice when its lower I think. Your high voice either needs work, or should just be dropped.
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