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Old 03-15-2006, 04:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux
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Originally Posted by Mr Slogan

The more Hate you consume to ya Digestive system of a diet, the better.
Your words and actions will slap those in time, quicker than a mouse devours his cheddar.
I don't like this line, but overall it is a good attempt. You use 'ya' to many times though. It seems that sometimes you forget to be 'street' then just burst into a group of ya's.
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