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Old 03-16-2006, 03:33 PM   #482 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Merkaba
Don't worry, thats universally recognised language for "I haven't looked into your childs progress that much as I really don't give two shits about the students I just want my pay"

I got the same thing all the time. Luckily for the last 4 years I haven't allowed my parents to go, which hasn't been too hard since they don't want to go eather.
Merkaba.
Good effort. However, there is a comma after 'student's' and as you can see the word 'either' needed correcting.

You clearly have the ability, but you need to put more effort in. 8/10.
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