03-16-2006, 02:52 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Abu Dhabi
Posts: 7,993
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Originally Posted by right-track
Merkaba.
Good effort. However, there is a comma after 'student's' and as you can see the word 'either' needed correcting.
You clearly have the ability, but you need to put more effort in. 8/10.
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