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Originally Posted by Crazy Luv
that last line doesnt fit in it, sorry hun
A guiltless man he wears a suit
Made of jewels and fancy furs
People hang their troubles
In a wreath upon his curls
I have heard he values pain
More than his diamonds and his pearls
On the surface he seems used to it
But he aint home yet
Change A to This
Take out he[edit: never mind on this one]
And, to me, the last line doesnt fit
I’m so sick and tired of this mask
That let’s me sneak into your past
You may figure out my agenda
But I move too fast
For my sins your compensation
There is a little I could ask
Dead leaves for substitution
And I aint home yet
Shouldnt it be You may start to figure out my agenda. because if they figure it out, then that means you're not moving as fast as you think, are you
Take out a
Ahh, this last line dont do it for me at all
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1) the line fits everywhere because it doesn't necessarily need to rhyme as long as it has a special guitar riff to go with it everytime
2) the a should be there for the rythm
and it's like they could figure it out but he moves too fast... the way i see it is like.. even though they figure it out... he doesn't care, he doesn't look back..
something like that.. the moving too fast is not like the reason...