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and the "and" shouldn't be replaced with "but"
"and" is more poetic.. it lets you imagine stuff.. like a continuation
a "but" would be too harsh there
it kinda stops your dreaming thing
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*raising eyebrow* riiiight...
Anyways, who said the last line had to rhyme? its just the meaning i got from that line doesnt fit in with the rest that hes saying in the stanza.
There is a little I could ask , doesnt make sense with the
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and it's like they could figure it out but he moves too fast... the way i see it is like.. even though they figure it out... he doesn't care, he doesn't look back..
something like that.. the moving too fast is not like the reason...
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If he means it like that, then alright, it makes sense, but if not, then no.