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Old 11-03-2004, 05:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
dejectedFate
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Default emo songs written by you

i just thought that if you had a emo song you could post it a receive constuctive critisim i have one that i threw together cause i was sad


Chorus: It dosnt matter what you do
It dosnt matter what you say
I just have to keep wishing to myself
You don't get to live another day

Verse 1: Now I lay dieing in my room
Slowly bleeding from my open wound
And I wont start wishing you were at my side
Its not worth it, its hopeless I've already tryed it many times
I have to start hoping they'll be the next to die

Verse 2: Now my life slips through your fingertips
I wish that some how you could pay
But your just sitting in my room
Starring at my blood stained sheets and walls
Thats when my ghost starts creeping down the hall
I'm gonna make you pay
In the dearest way

Chorus: It dosnt matter what you do
It dosnt matter what you say
I just have to keep wishing to myself
You don't get to live another day

Verse 3: You stabbed me in the back
There was nothing I could do
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maybe when you find out that im dead
you'll realize what you did to me
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