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Old 11-05-2004, 07:08 PM   #9 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks
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You crazy kids and your songs

and David I must say I'm not a fan of the vocals but the music is cool



Not truly "emo" its hardcore with a slightly softer edge. 75% screams 10% sing 15% unintelligable mumbling. Its throwback style to say the least. This is my shortest and probably worst song, but if it gets a good enough recepetion I'll put up the ones that we actually play!

Sleep is so persuasive when you’re desperate
I’ll turn off the alarm, try turn off the world
Leave me to my self and my thoughts I’m gone
You and me, could be, just another fatal memory

Better instinct says no but I’ll over analyze
Funny how the lines on your arms run parallel
I saw that the first night
Did you notice It was the last

And we dance in this endless waltz
Let the dissonant symphony wash over us
The bitter notes mix with sour melodies
It causes us to slowly fade into obscurity
Quickly grab my hand before we’re too far gone

I won’t wait this time, half-past 2 and I’m gone
I swear you won’t make it you’re in a speeding coffin
A final rose is best it seems, to please, and me
I’ll die with the knowledge of what happened

And we dance in this endless waltz
Let the dissonant symphony wash over us
The bitter notes mix with sour melodies
I'll slay the final kiss, that you missed
but now we're too far gone
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