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Old 05-08-2006, 07:23 PM   #106 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants
angel of tragic days
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
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I shave tainted layers from my right forearm
like a razor on the leather. I scrape at flesh,
for what rests in marrow. The oozing seep from
leaking bags claws my my chest and I claw at the rash.
thats what i really liked the most about it. Seems as if you have a dark mind, and it steps out into your writings. It hits the right nerves and dragged me in. I really liked it. Good work!
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