After reading that, the first 4 lines make pretty good reading. I like it. I'm not sure about the next 4 lines though. Is that you trying to say the waste gets at you like an irritating rash?
Either-or it's pretty rich in imagery, again I like it.
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She thinks I'm a reclusive genius, she's going to be very disappointed when she finds out i'm a reclusive w anker
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