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Old 05-09-2006, 09:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
TheBig3
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Theres been about 2 people in history who wrote them well.

You create a horrid pattern with them that leaves no breathing room.

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climb
ship
trip
ski
knee

People need some movement, it becomes so locked up and heavily interwoven that you'd need to nail everything perfectly to have a decent story unravel.
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