Seems like a good foundation. What does it sound like in your head? I'm imagining it's kind of punk-sounding. I think playing around with the wording could make it tighter. Anyhow, good luck!
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Everywhere I travel, tiny life. Single-serving sugar, single-serving cream, single pat of butter. The microwave Cordon Bleu hobby kit. Shampoo-conditioner combos, sample-packaged mouthwash, tiny bars of soap. The people I meet on each flight? They're single-serving friends.
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