I like the last verse the best. Not the best i've seen you do though. Its fine the way it is, so I really have nothing to add.
Hooray for pointless critiqueing!
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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