Thread: atrium part 3
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Old 05-31-2006, 03:39 PM   #7 (permalink)
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LOL I wasn't disappointed in the way you think. The fact is I loved the story, but the ending wasn't what I expected and I thought something else was going to happen. I wasn't disappointed with the writing, it was good- it's like a movie where you think there is going to be a happy ending, and then something bad happens. Like yeah great story, but oh man what a disappointment that <main character> didn't get his <objective> accomplished or didn't learn <enter lesson here> - the fact is it's a great story and to even draw those emotions out of a reader/listener to begin with is a mark of high accomplishment. I understood even the little metaphors and the story, so you don't need to work on clearing anything up.
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