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Sneer · 11-23-2004, 06:35 AM

i think its pretty good, i like the the way it tells a story. 6 id say. got a bit confused at first when u kept saying "fined", take it you mean find?! and the "hello hello" for some totally strange reason reminded of the lional richie cheese monstrosity we call "Hello?"- but that isnt your fault, just my stupid thought process. so overall, nice lyrics.

11-23-2004, 06:35 AM	#11 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,430	i think its pretty good, i like the the way it tells a story. 6 id say. got a bit confused at first when u kept saying "fined", take it you mean find?! and the "hello hello" for some totally strange reason reminded of the lional richie cheese monstrosity we call "Hello?"- but that isnt your fault, just my stupid thought process. so overall, nice lyrics. __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show