You have a good voice with lots of potential. However, try to use air more from your diaphragm, (when you breathe in try to make your stomach look fat and not raise your shoulders), and DON'T sing through your nose (I head a little bit of that in the recordings). Watch the music video for Miss Murder by AFI and try to sing like Davey. Yeah he overexaggerates the words but it will encourage a proper sound. As for rhythm, practice practice practice. Tap your foot with the beat, COUNT the one two three fours, and you will get it. Get your friend to nod you in until you can get it yourself. Keep it up though you do have potential.
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