sound like to me that u have experienced this situation b4 am I right?? but as I've read it I understand too because I was like that no other girls would be the same as the one u loved the most....... just add more lines for the chorus... Mere 4 lines aren't enough.... too short.... but the rest is good anyway.. but hell there alot of rythms O.O normally for verses there'll be half the paragragh with ryhmes but ur is all!! lol
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all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.
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