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Originally Posted by mosesandtherubberducky
Rhyming doesn't have to be complex but this song is a little shallow zepair
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Point remains, the rhyming in this is like, nursery school.
Also, now that I 'know' what its about. You write on the subject very poorly, half the things in here don't make much sense. Blade of red? Even if red is a metaphor for blood, it still doesn't make much sense.