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Originally Posted by beat_monkey
baby if you want my loving,
if you want to make things right.
i ask you,
hold me tight.
hold me, hold me tight,
its only me baby.
dont get a fright,
just hold me tight.
when i came to see you,
i had to come out in the pouring rain.
when I knocked upon your door,
you opened up and fell to the floor.
baby if you want my loving,
if you want to make things right.
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The third line in your second stanza must done away with.
That whole ''baby if you want my loving" thing . . . seems awkward.
Maybe it's me and the whole english as a second language thing. i just can't imagine me myself saying it. . . . I just don't like it.