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Old 07-25-2006, 09:34 AM   #8 (permalink)
Raine
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Originally Posted by ZeppelinAir
is this any better,

Rise Again

Why did you leave this,
How could you leave me alone,
And all we been through,
didn’t mean a ****ing thing,

The moon in the sky,
The tears in my eyes,
On the night,
It all died, 2x

Your life meant every thing,
And you just let it slip away,
What about the ones you left behind,
Why don’t you just go away, (let me live my life)

The moon in the sky,
The tears in my eyes,
On the night,
It all died, 2x

These memories don’t fade,
They wont ever die,
I will have to let you go,
Until the end when I see you again,

The moon in the sky,
The tears in my eyes,
On the night,
It all died, 2x

Only to see you again….
Only to see you again….
Only to see you again….
It's better. . . but there doesn't seem to be any emotion in here. Anybody could've written soemthing like this. You're stilll too vague.
It all just seems so forced
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