sleepy jack

Okay, if you can't take crits that aren't kissing your ass. Then don't post here, simple as that. Don't tell anyone to mature when you act like an overly-pissy baby cause we didn't suck up to you.

I could have been much meaner, and blunt then I was. I was even trying to be nice with it, which is why I didn't go outright and say it sucked. Since you're acting the way you are, i'll say it. That whole thing sucked, there wasn't anything good about it. Not even the rhyming, which for the record was annoying. In short; I prefer your cliched earlier work over this unimaginative, repetitive trash.

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