Originally Posted by Ace

Yeah the whole river thing was thrown in, because I was thinking about making a "down with me, were sinking". But I don't think I can use that in the second part. So I may change that, or find some way to make it fit.

I posted it here, cause I'm nowhere near done working on it, and you were one of the 2 people who commented on my last one. I like to keep everything a secret untill I'm finished, I guess =)).