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Originally Posted by FailurexByxDesignerxJeans
Its no where near finished. I just want to know if its a good start. Or what i can change.
Verse 1
Im a Disoriented Teen
With a lot of Hate
I live my life without
breathing day to day
drowned by my own anxiety
I tend to cut my own throat
start of chorus
Strangled by the same line
that you slashed off once more..
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It sounds like garbage
Much too cliche
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A mi no me importa nada
Para mi la vida es un sueƱo
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